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Dance with Me Needs editing help badly.The book had potential but the error s were just to hard to overcome Every single page of this novella had multiple errors..The heroine was chopping at the bit.Not chompingchopping, they had vanilla envelopes not manila ones I can go on and on and on I could not get into reading this because of the errors A shame really because it could have been a decent book if the author bothered to hire an editor or even gotten some friends and family to go through it Needs editing help badly.The book had potential but the error s were just to hard to overcome Every single page of this novella had multiple errors..The heroine was chopping at the bit.Not chompingchopping, they had vanilla envelopes not manila ones I can go on and on and on I could not get into reading this because of the errors A shame really because it could have been a decent book if the author bothered to hire an editor or even gotten some friends and family to go through it for her Martin controls everything in his world Or he did until he finds Amanda finds her sitting in his ninghtclub He wants to dance She has no interest in following his lead If she doesn t change her mind soon, he ll change it for herThis e book contains sexually explicit scenes and adult language and may be considered offensive to some readers FOR adults ONLY, ❰KINDLE❯ ✿ Paid Boyfriend Author kimpyvon – 9facts.co.uk he ll change it for herThis e book contains sexually explicit scenes and adult language and may be considered offensive to some readers FOR adults ONLY, Whatever possessed me to read this DRECK I ll never know, except perhaps that I m a sucker for bad boys Martin is CRUEL, MEAN, NASTY ASSHOLE WARNING This is not romance novel, its a dusturbing story about a asshole that is used to getting everything he wants, if not then he kidnaps,humiliates,mistreat woman YUCK Whatever possessed me to read this DRECK I ll never know, except perhaps that I m a sucker for bad boys Martin is CRUEL, MEAN, NASTY ASSHOLE WARNING This is not romance novel, its a dusturbing story about a asshole that is used to getting everything he wants, if not then he kidnaps,humiliates,mistreat woman YUCK Crazy fun read Needs editing. This is NOT a well written story the author commits pretty much every mistake there is from punctuation to he she confusion to wrong word choice Read the sample and you will get a pretty good idea of how bad it is.Despite the writing, I found the story quite compelling and it s a novella length so it was easier to ignore the writing The hero is super dominant and possessive And finally, it s weirdly, oddly, romantic, especially if you make it to the end. The worst book, novela, whatever, I ever read I keept reading, hoping that the guy would drop dead.Was I ever dissapointed.PS the book needs editing really bad. I will express myself in points I made myself finish it so I can give an honest review SPOILER ALERT Very badly written needs a lot of editing The Hero was the true epitome of scum asshole bastard The Heroine was a victim Seriously That s it Secondary characters were also some of the worst humanity has to offer This was NOT a romance This was rape straight out Hero deserves to burn alive forever directly BURN IN HELL ASSHOLE What the heck was with those girls act I will express myself in points I made myself finish it so I can give an honest review SPOILER ALERT Very badly written needs a lot of editing The Hero was the true epitome of scum asshole bastard The Heroine was a victim Seriously That s it Secondary characters were also some of the worst humanity has to offer This was NOT a romance This was rape straight out Hero deserves to burn alive forever directly BURN IN HELL ASSHOLE What the heck was with those girls acting like it was a party That is NOT how victims react Gross misrepresentation Also a perfect example of Stockholm Syndrome horrendous grammar and editing he intent tono relationship development between H and hH was cruel and creepy